Line Editing
Voice, flow, and emotional impact that help your story sound as good as it feels.
Line Editing is where your prose becomes as compelling as the story you've worked so hard to tell.
Together, we'll strengthen rhythm, clarity, dialogue, emotion, pacing, and flow while carefully protecting the voice that makes your story yours. Every edit is made with your readers in mind, helping every sentence pull them deeper into your world instead of pulling them out of it.
You'll receive thoughtful, collaborative edits that strengthen your writing without polishing away your unique voice.
What's Included:
Comprehensive line edits throughout your manuscript
Sentence-level improvements for rhythm, clarity, pacing, and flow
Dialogue edits that strengthen voice and authenticity
Suggestions to deepen emotional impact and reader immersion
Removal of repetition, awkward phrasing, and unnecessary wordiness
Word choice refinements that better match your story's tone, genre, and voice
Margin notes for any bigger-picture issues I notice along the way
Investment: $0.023 / word
🌙 New Moon Pricing: Reserve your editing slot with a deposit by December 31, 2026 to lock in this rate—even if your project is scheduled for 2027.
Happily Ever After Loyalty Program
One of my favorite parts of this work is building long-term relationships with authors. As a thank-you for trusting me with multiple projects, you'll automatically receive increasing discounts as we continue working together.
The Second Date (Projects 2–3) — Save 5%
The Marriage of Convenience (Projects 4–5) — Save 10%
The Happily Ever After (Projects 6+) — Save 15%