Comprehensive Combination Edits

This premium hybrid service combines big‑picture story shaping with your choice of line‑level craft or copy‑level clarity and bit of hype-girl cheerleading in a single, comprehensive pass.

A comprehensive edit gives your book deep, story‑level support while also refining your prose in the way that serves you best. I’ll look at how your plot, characters, and pacing are working, highlight opportunities to strengthen emotion and tension, and help shine your narrative. You’ll get one cohesive round that elevates the heart of your story while also polishing your pages at either the line or copy level—whichever focus you choose.

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clarifies structure, pacing, and character arcs
highlights areas where tension or stakes can be amplified
highlights moments to deepen emotion or tension
identifies plot gaps, logic issues, or unclear motivations
highlights opportunities to deepen worldbuilding or atmosphere
pinpoints pacing slowdowns or rushed moments
includes edits letter, margin notes, and in‑text edits
you choose your track based on your goals, and I'll bring the fierce enthusiasm:

Investment starts at $0.035 / word

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The Line Edit Focus (Voice & Flow)

I focus deeply on how your story reads, refining the rhythm of your language to maximize emotional impact.

The Prose: Elevating sentence cadence, deep sensory atmosphere, and dialogue pacing to make your characters' voices pop.
The Style: Smoothing awkward phrasing, eliminating repetitive tells, and tightening word choices to perfectly match your genre’s mood.

The Copy Edit Focus (Clarity & Mechanics)

I run a deep-dive mechanics sweep to ensure your manuscript reads flawlessly and your story logic stays completely airtight.

The Technical Polish: A meticulous sweep to lock down grammar, punctuation, spelling, and style guide consistency.
The Narrative Continuity: Back-end awareness of your plot details, timeline logic, and character descriptions so no continuity errors slip through.