Alpha Reading

A supportive, big‑picture look at your early draft—offering clarity, direction, and a little cheerleading when you need it most.

This early‑stage read gives you thoughtful, honest insight into what’s working, what’s wobbling, and what your story needs next. You’ll get clear, encouraging feedback that helps you understand your draft’s strengths and opportunities without ever feeling overwhelmed. I’m here to help you see the heart of your story, stay motivated, and take your next steps with confidence and a touch of hype‑girl energy.

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offers big‑picture feedback on plot, pacing, and characters
identifies scenes or threads that feel unclear or rushed
reflects on character motivations, relationships, and emotional throughlines
calls out moments that land properly
surfaces questions a first‑time reader naturally has
helps you understand how your story is being experienced on the page
provides clear next‑step guidance to support revisions
includes margin comments, a compiled notes document, and unhinged hype‑girl commentary for those moments that deserve extra joy

Investment starts at $0.006 / word

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