Alpha Reading
Honest, encouraging feedback that helps you shape your story before the editing process begins.
Alpha Reading is where you find out how your story is landing while it's still flexible enough to grow.
I'll read your manuscript as a romance reader first, sharing what kept me turning the page, where I wanted more, and the moments that deserve your attention. My goal isn't to overwhelm you with editorial jargon—it's to help you see your story through fresh eyes so you can move into revisions with clarity and excitement.
You'll receive thoughtful, encouraging feedback that celebrates what's already working while highlighting the areas with the greatest opportunity for growth.
What's included:
Honest reader-focused feedback on your manuscript as a whole
Margin comments throughout your manuscript
Highlights of what pulled me in—and what gave me pause
Notes on areas areas that could be strengthened or clarified
Celebration of the scenes, characters, and emotional moments that shine
Questions that naturally came up as I read
A summary of my overall reading experience and next-step recommendations
Investment: $0.006 / word
🌙 New Moon Pricing: Reserve your editing slot with a deposit by December 31, 2026 to lock in this rate—even if your project is scheduled for 2027.
happily ever after loyalty program
One of my favorite parts of this work is building long-term relationships with authors. As a thank-you for trusting me with multiple projects, you'll automatically receive increasing discounts as we continue working together.
The Second Date (Projects 2–3): Save 5%
The Marriage of Convenience (Projects 4–5): Save 10%
The Happily Ever After (Projects 6+): Save 15%